Tuesday 18 November 2008

Feedback grade #1

Adam, Joe, Will
While there are some interesting videos mentioned here, there are significant gaps in your planning. Will and Adam - you are missing a textual analysis and as far as I can see, you have not gone back to improve the first ones on the basis of my comments.

While Adam and Will have posted up moodboards - I couldn't view them, Joe's is missing and there was no evaluation of ideas.

You must tidy this up, improve and post a number of entries explaining your concept so far.

Currently planning grade at level 3.

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